Draft feedback

 After finishing the first two pages of the digipak draft, I received feed back from my teacher and classmates of what worked well and what rot improve next time. I was told that the coherent colour scheme, velvet textured wall and costume choice all worked well within the pages. 

However, there were many areas I still could improve on. they felt that overall the images were too large, filling too much of the cover, disrupting the aim of creating a minimalistic look. This can be solved when initially when taking the photos, to make sure there in enough background space and the model is further away in the photo and furthermore, making all the font smaller, ensuring more empty space. Moreover, the digipak begins to look more amateur and not very convincing when the images are cut out from their original background and stuck onto another. This flattens the professional look to the images and it would appear much better if the photos are taken with the desirable background already in the shot. 

lastly, when looking at the digipak I was mainly taking reference off of nd a couple of others that also use this minimalistic approach, I realised that they had a common ground of all using one photo for the front of the digipak and leaving the back page plain, to keep the pages simplistic. this is something I would like to achieve when creating the real Digipak.